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October 19, 2004
the deadening of comp, and its new life as a blog
Diane Greco (Oct 19) echoes a snippet of conversation that a dear friend and I had a few days ago. He was lamenting the way the PhD work, and the coursework specifically, had really turned his writing into drivel. I don't think my writing has changed much--but it has not improved much, either. I have a theory about the academic genre/voice, and how the inclination to appear/sound detached enough be analytical and make critical conclusions effectively strips a writer of human voice.
There are exceptions to this rule. I have a handful of professors whose academic work has personality. Although, and this is just occuring to me now, do I inject personality into their writing simply because I know them? Do I read their work hearing the cadence of their voice in my head, thereby creating the illusion of a voice?
At any rate, Greco posts on finishing an article about diet blogs (which, when I originally read the phrase "diet blogs," I had images of people, like me, who need to quit blogging so much, as in go on a blog diet--but I think its about people who use blogs to support/track diets):
Even after all that dull, dispiriting comp theory, I'm writing stronger, faster, better. I still get tired, and my ideas sometimes don't connect on the page, but ... well, it just feels better. Plus, by practicing what I preach, I feel more comfortable about, you know, preaching it.
This encourages me. I think that blogging helps me to do a couple of things that I haven't *ever* done before: 1) write daily 2) write about things *I* want to write about [as in, not assignments, or writing that is not externally prompted], and 3) use/create a genre that allows me to incorporate other authors' work AND wax personal/ philosophical.
Plus, when I sit down to blog, it isn't only writing. I spend a few hours a day (wow. but I do) reading all kinds of other blogs before/during my own posting.
I don't know that Greco was making her claims about the rejuvenation of her writing as an effect of her blogging; she doesn't make the connection explicit at all. She's feeling like she's getting her groove back as a writer AFTER comp and rhet and teaching have all bled her dry. It might have been a coincidence that the article in which she found new life as a writer was about blogs.
My new life as a writer is because of this crazy thing.
And that prof asked AGAIN today (actually, it was more of a statement): "You ARE doing your diss on blogs...(?)"
I assigned my students the task of setting up a blog with blogger to serve as their site journals (I have a service learning class). They moaned and groaned, but I got up to the teacher machine and in less than 1 minute I had a blog set up, right in front of them. They quit groaning.
I also set up that prof's class with a blog the other day.
Lots of students blogging. There's got to be some questions I can ask and try to answer...
Posted by mryonker at October 19, 2004 10:39 PM
Comments
A couple of quick replies before I hit the hay...
First, is there any difference b/w voice and the illusion of voice? That's a little flip, I know, but I think sound. What is voice other than a reader's projection onto a text? And I say that as someone who believes, mistakenly or not, that most of I write sounds different from most of what I read, even as I know that I must be projecting...
Second, and less flippy, is that you have a little bit of time to decide whether or not you want to focus on blogs for the diss. You have less time if what you decide to do is focus on their use in the classroom--it's a more heavily articulated research tradition you'll be entering in that case, with particular modes of research and rules of evidence, ones that (imho) require a little more advanced planning.
Drop me a note if you want to talk/email/IM on this a little more (and that's an offer rather than a statement...heh).
cgb
Posted by: collin at October 20, 2004 01:55 AM
yeah, I'm a little divided here, and you're asking me to better articulate what I'm still working out: I guess I make the mistake here of conflating "voice" with "personality."
Certainly the *sound* or imagined sound of a voice reading adds to a text. But I'm also talking about a personality--a sense of who a writer is. Someone somewhere was doing these horrible word-counting and sentence-measuring studies, and even though I'm highly skeptical of such quantitative work, I'm also wondering if this is what I'm talking about.
It's also what we see in handbooks and readers: things like sentence variety, a particular level of detail and example, *making it important to the reader*. So much of what I had to read for, say, 601, was nearly void of personality. Like, I had no sense, as I read (and I'm loathe to offer a for instance b/c I don't want to hand out indictments) of *who* the writers were.
And I think what I'm concerned about is the academic writing, as a genre, ignores who the writer is. There are people working against this--mostly third wave academic feminism people. But still, the more a writer can hide herself, the more the writer appears to be a faceless, body-less brain-computer who is unmoved by internal motivations or inclinations, the more ____ (credible?) she is.
Anyway, all this means is I have to read Burke *again,* b/c I'm sure he can (make it all better!!) put into perspective things like writer-motives and responsibility of identification (it's with the reader, I bet--in fact, didn't I argue that in an essay once?). I probably should read Davis again, to, since the first time through I rushed so much that I can't even remember anything except that I envied her writing.
My own wrangling with this stems from a certain liberation that comes with writing, having it read, having it be (quasi-)important (ie getting some work done), and having it be a pleasant "real-to-me" experience.
I don't know. I'm getting out of hand with the personal thing, but it ties in heavily with another thread I'm teasing concerning the illusion of public/private (an illusion particularly difficult for the mom entertain/maintain).
Further, I'm trying not to sound too soft (though I fear I'm not succeeding), in that I'm hypersensitive about your take on the divide between simply "caring" about things/issues/(people) and doing actual work. Either way, this has been a huge help, and I would write more if I didn't have a kid grabbing the keyboard, screaming.
Thanks for being the sounding board. :)
Posted by: madeline at October 20, 2004 10:03 AM
I'm gonna shift this over to email (in fact I already have), but I wanted to note here that I think there's a crucial difference between personality or voice as a property of text (which is pretty arguable) and some like that as a result of social interaction.
Maybe it's an immediacy of audience issue. It can be tough to invoke an audience in academic writing whereas it's easy in the blogosphere and there are ways to do it (trackbacks, e.g.) that don't have analogs in academia.
Oops. Here I am splitting the conversation. I'll save my other thoughts for later...
Posted by: collin at October 20, 2004 02:00 PM